Pretty cool! I think I would've tightened up the pacing a little bit to fit into that 15-second timeslot, and maybe use that backspacing in 'graphic design' to fix a purposeful typo rather than just having the effect there with no purpose. <- I think fixing a typo on screen could give some human connection to you as a graphic designer and help you connect with clients (as to err is human)
This is really cool, everything moves very fluidly and fun. My only critique would be that there isn't a lot of time to read your last bit of contact information before the final transition.
I really like how the words bounce and how the type hits on the beat. The timing feels super satisfying and well thought out. Maybe just a little more time on the contact info at the end would make it even stronger. Great job!
I appreciate you taking out more counterforms! I think it makes the whole thing more cohesive and makes the "e" feel less out of place in the beginning. The animations are super cool and go really well with the music!
I like that you took a risk in animating so many letters and they look super cool bouncing in. I would remove the last white circle fade out transition to keep your contact info on the screen.
Pretty cool! I think I would've tightened up the pacing a little bit to fit into that 15-second timeslot, and maybe use that backspacing in 'graphic design' to fix a purposeful typo rather than just having the effect there with no purpose. <- I think fixing a typo on screen could give some human connection to you as a graphic designer and help you connect with clients (as to err is human)
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool, everything moves very fluidly and fun. My only critique would be that there isn't a lot of time to read your last bit of contact information before the final transition.
ReplyDeleteI love the way the type falls in with the beat. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteI really like your attention to timing and musicality. having words drop on beat is very satisfying
ReplyDeleteYour music fits very well with the text animation you chose! Your contact information at the end does cut off a bit early though!
ReplyDeleteI really like how the words bounce and how the type hits on the beat. The timing feels super satisfying and well thought out. Maybe just a little more time on the contact info at the end would make it even stronger. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI love the sound, I feel like it goes so well with the calming type and the movements seem really smooth as well!
ReplyDeleteI appreciate you taking out more counterforms! I think it makes the whole thing more cohesive and makes the "e" feel less out of place in the beginning. The animations are super cool and go really well with the music!
ReplyDeleteI like that you took a risk in animating so many letters and they look super cool bouncing in. I would remove the last white circle fade out transition to keep your contact info on the screen.
ReplyDeleteI can't even imagine how long it took to make the motion of the letters that fluid, awesome job! Great addition of contact info at the end.
ReplyDeletethis feels really clean and professional. maybe quicken the timing slightly?
ReplyDeleteI think this looks great! I think the one thing I would change is the sizing of the text for your info to fill the screen more
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